Yay, right? Fun story, my first every posted, I haven't read it for years, this is gonna be great!
Except then I get into the nuts and bolts, and...
Credit goes to http://gifforlife.tumblr.com/search/surprised
Oh my god, grammar, woman! Punctuation! Mother of God, did you not attend college? Don't you know the difference between "to" and "too?" Did you even read this before you posted it the first time?
Which, of course, I did, but as this was my very first story to be publically posted anywhere, and I was a total noob, I didn't get it beta'd. I should have. Oy. I'm finding it hard to resist the urge to restrict myself to only technical and not substantive rewrites. Guess I just need to write another part. Incidentally, there will be an epilogue of sorts added onto the end of the completed story.
Also...I have grown as a writer and a human being. I know I need a beta. Readerwife, prepare to be mobbed. Any other interested parties, let me know. I want this to be good before I pay for a cover and get my peeps to help me massage it into different file formats for public consumption.
Happy Tuesday, people.